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The New adventures of Hulk-Girl
Computer HiJinks

Narrator: this is a story about a young girl called Vivian Jordan, the 15 year old sweet pie, with a a secret, She is also the Hulk-Girl, It happened when she was at G&G Health Labs, when an explosion happened, she got hit with gamma rays in the process, so when she gets angry, hurt or just wanna do it for herself, she becomes Hulk-Girl

Narrator: It was a general school day, and Vivian is currently in home going her homework, on her computer.

Vivian: ah.. only a few more words before i'm finished.. then i can relax

Narrator: but as soon as she finishes her homework, her computer suffers a power cut for no reason

Vivian: what.. what.. no no.. what the.. you stupid piece of junk *slams her hand against the monitor but so hard that he hurts her hand*
Vivian: OOOOOOOOOOOW *her eyes go green*
Vivian: you.. stupid machine *stands up*

Vivian's body began to transform, vivian was so mad that she didn't see it happen, her body started to grow, making her clothing get tighter and ride closer towards her body. But soon she realises it happen to her, and tries to stop it but the transformation is too far into the thransformation.

Vivian started to moan a little as her body grew, the first signs of her growth have passed and the second stage began, where her jeans began to strain, and her chest began to grow bigger, also her short hair began to grow longer, but still staying short, and changing from a blone to a black with green highlights.

Vivian: it's too.. good

Vivian's t-shirt gets tighter as her body grows, nearly ripping her sleeves, she leans against the desk, ripping her jeans in places, showing her muscled legs, she slowly began to deeply moan, from the ripping of her clothes and growing body, she smirked, as her skin began to shift from a light tan, to light yellow to a lime green then a dark shade of green, soon, her shirt tore in the middle which had shown her b cup bra, snapping under the pressure as they grow to a c cup... the last of her transformation was her socks as she took her shoes off earlier before doing her homework...

Vivian was no longer there but her more sassy and hot alter-ego, hulk-girl, she slamed her hand on the top of the monitor, then realises that the plug for the monitor was loosened and pushes it back in..

Hulk-Girl: oh.. boy *blushes* i didn't know

Hulk-Girl then calmed her self down and returned to normal and went back to work, until the the programme used to do her homework, closed itself off, Vivian then growled again and her eyes turned green

Vivian: Not again!!!!!
Okay, this is a fan story, which is a continue off from the aventures of hulk-girl by shfan, which is a very good story set, so i've done my own version

Hulk-Girl/Vivian Jordan belong to :iconshfan:
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pokemonuser6606 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
i wanna marry her
Natter45 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lonebeatle Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
Nice touch with the narrator and the mini-intro of Vivian, clever move, but the script style stumps the flow a little for such a short tale; next time a scriptless tale and a bit more of description of the situations and you'll be on the other side!
Natter45 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
eh, it's my first fan story of shfan's hulk girl though.. cut me a little slack
Lonebeatle Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009
Just givin' some points, not pushing anything.
Natter45 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh, it's okay pal
Strangerataru Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Not a bad rendition there of the Hulk-Girl world...
Natter45 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks, i'm flattered
SHFan Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I do like the situation and the narroration was a nice touch. But I will let the readers see what they think of this one.

And I do thank you for the fan story! :)
Natter45 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no worries, yours were very.. sexy
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